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jerichofan94


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your welcome Bel glad to make you happy...Theresa

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OK ILL POST ONE AND THATS ALL FOR TNIGHT OTHERWISE YOULL ROB ME OF TOMORROW OK YOU BETTER ENJOY IT COS YA LUCKY HAHAHA HERE!!!

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CHAPTER 2Eric was walking home as he lived a fair few blocks from school.Rather than catch the bus he preferred to take in the view and enjoyed the walk.He was only about a block or two from home when he looked up and seen the girl from school.Calleigh saw him from her front porCh and being the friendliest and most cheerful girl in town she put her hand up and in her southern drawl she saidC: heeeeey eric!Eric lifted his head again and see her and his face brightened up when he seen her.E: oh uh hey calleighThen he stopped and calleigh started to walk down the front steps to the front gateC: hey whatcha doing she said with a smileE: uh nothing just walking homeC: what you dont catch the bus?E: na i prefer to walk and the view is greatC: i guess if your into that then she laughedE: you should try it sometime he saidCalleigh was nodding her head and was holding in a laughC: maybe i wil one day eric maybe i willThen calleigh and eric smiled at each other and then jake turned up in his pick up truck .Eric whisperedE: i better go and then calleigh also whisperedC: ok see you ericAnd then eric quickly walked off before jake could do anything.When eric got home he went straight upstairs and into his roomHis room had a big tree right outside the window that he could climb into..As he was sitting down doing his homework his sister marisol cam in and jumped on his bed and was laying sideways.M: hey little man what you doing?E:im not little he laughed then he spun around on his chair to see marisol.M: so how was school today?E: umm yeah it was good for a majorityM: really?????? i thought you would have come home with something at least done to youE: thanks marisol way to go on making me feel betterM: im sorry its just why do you do chemistry its way off your classes yetE: because i like it ok is that so wrong?M: gees sorry i askedE: im sorry i snappedM: well you are kinda gorgeous but you hide behinds those nerdy glasses and ....E: IM NOT NERDY CANT A GUY BE SMART AND KEEP TO HIMSELF?M: uh yeah eric thats what nerds do!!!!!!E: nu huh?M: YUH HUHE: you lieM: you deny she laughed Then eric threw a pillow at her then he saidE: marisol can i ask you a question?M: sure its not sex related is it???E: nooo and what would you know anyways?M: nothing now ask the questionE: what do you know about calleigh duquesne?M: ah ha i knew there was something else there always is Well let me see well umm she dates the hottest guy in school umm her parents are rich her dads a lawyer and oh yeah my brother loves her she laughedE: get out marisol he jokedM: ERIC AND CALLEIGH SITTING IN THAT TREE (poiting to the one outside) KI-SS-INGE: GET OUT MARISOL NOW!!! Then she walked out and he locked the door.Eric was having a had time concentrating because all he culd think about was how pretty calleigh looked and how green her eyes were and hOW much he wanted to date her.

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HEY bELthat was funnyhahahapoor ericand marisol such a bullylike a girl i knowright Emma?hahahalove Nancy & Emma

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oh no you got marisol all wrong think of them as bouncing off each other shes playful bully not nasty bully they are real close more than his other 2 sisters and she wants him to be less nerdy more gorgeous but thanks anyways im off to bed for once early too its only 11pm thats like a first in months hahaha hey kristen no walk of shame lol thanks nancy

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oooI understand nowwellbe nice huhgood night over there!!!Nancy & Emma

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HOW CUTE WAS THAT?!?!!I LUVED IT BEL .POST MORE N KEEP UP THIS AWESOME STORIE

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aww good chapter i loved it Bel please continue soon...Theresa

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that was a great chapter Bel ~~Carly~~ ^__^

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this is adorable.

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hey hey clara you know im a eric/calleigh fan but thats not to say you wont have anything haha it hard and i thought eric was ours hahaha i wont interfere in this story ok ill post more soon

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CHAPTER 3Over the weekend eric kept bumping into calleigh everywhere in the fruit shop at the drug store at the markets at the cafe and then in the mall.E: ma im going to have a look over here ok EM: ok ill meet you back here in an hourE: okThen eric started to look around the shop for a new pair of pants and shoes and then he toko the pants and went to try them on.As he was getting chnaged he saw something in the mirror reflectionIn the curtain it was calleigh getting undressed in her change room.Eric was leaning more to his right to see more better and then he fell out of his change room and out infront of everyone his pants still half downa nd you could see his boxers showing.E: CRAP eric jumped up and quickly and got back into his change room.Calleigh giggled from her change room and then eric got his pants and left.Eric was siting on a bench eating ice cream wwaiting for his mother when someone came and sat next to himE: sorryC: dont be you havent done anythingEric looked up and it was calleighE: hey calleighC: eric that was too funny back thereE: oh yeah you seenthat did you?C: i know you were looking at meE: there now theres something i can say sorry for he laughedC: its ok i was looking at you too those curtains always do leave a little open she giggledThere was a photo booth inforn tf them and calleigh saidC: hey you wanna go in?E: arent those for couples?C: no its just fun eric come onE: i dont know what would jake sayC: i dont need jake to tell me what i can and cant do come on and she grabbed his hand and took him in and she sat on his lapEric was beginning to get worried as calleigh got him so excited.They put their money to get 2 lots of printouts and then calleigh grabbed his face and they pulled funny faces for the first six then eric and calleigh did a serious face and then calleigh went to kiss eric on the cheek but he misinterpreted it and kissed her on the lips.Calleigh didnt do anything so she kissed him back.Then the camera took the last picture and it was of them kissing and then they pulled apartand she soflt saidC: WOW E: did you just say wow?C: uh yes i mean wow look at the time i better go before my dad gets worried and then they got their photos and looked at them and then they laughed at the funny ones and then they left.Eric met up with his mother and then they went home.When eric got home he went up to his room aagin and he was looking at calleigh and his pictures.Eric knew calleigh was fun and there was something that she did to him when they were together they had a spark that made both of them do the most spontaneous of actions.Erc stared at the picture of them kissing for ages.Then marisol burst into his room and she jumped on his bed and snatched the pictures.E: MARISOL GIVE THEM BACK!!!!!!M: NU HUH!!!! oh my god eric this is you and calleigh what did you doE: nothing we were shopping at the mall i seen her she suggested we get the pictures done and then by accidentM: what you stuck your tongue down her throat?E: hey hey im not like that M: oh thats right sweet nice little romeo eric she laughedE: you better kept this quiet marisolM: whats in it for me?E: you keep it quiet and i wont tell ma that your sneaking out to see that policeman horatio whats his name he laughedM: hey how did you know about that? and hes not that much older than me only 5 yearsE: you know ma or dad wont see it that wayM: ok fine then dealE: and what exactly are you doing with him anyways?M: nothing just fooling around now shhh before anyone else hears.Then marisol left andgave the pictures back to eric which he put under his pillows.

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awww Eric, and Calleigh kissed YAY, Marisol's sneaking out bad girl please continue Bel this is getting good...Theresa

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CHAPTER 4 The next week at school calleigh and her friends were watching everyone walk in and calleigh saw eric and he smiled then he kept walking.Clara: Hey calleigh i think the new boy has a thing for youC: dont be silly she saidThen another guy walked past and kendra smiled and saidK: hey youHe looked at her then smiled Then he looked at the girl standing next to her and smiled as well then he put his head down and kept walking.He yelled out R: hey eric isnt it?E: yeah umm ryan right?R: yeah you got me How was your weekend?E: great i embarrassed myself at the mall infront of everyone and then i just studied the rest of the weekend.R: what is that it? you didnt let loose?E: let loose how??? he shook his headR: well ok me and the girls went out on the water with the boat and then we took the jet skis outE: jet skis wow are you as loaded as they are? pointing at calleighs friendsR: well yeah kinda but i dont like to tell everyone thats my difference they do tell hhow much they have i dontE: WOW thats great we have a summer house with all our boats and stuff in it but i scuba dive not much of a boater R: scuba boat they all got something in common ....water this weekend im taking you out ok?E: ok thanks ryanR: oh hey call me wolfe pleaseE: ok wolfe thenIn class eric and calleigh and jake were all sitting next to each other and then the teacher split them up with the person to their leftJ: sir umm whats the rule?TEACHER: First row third row look at the person to your right thats your partner for this assigment.Eric looked to his left and seen it was calleigh and jake looked to his left and seen kendra.J: great K: yeah nice to see you too jake she said sarcasticallyEric was happy that he and calleigh were working on the assignment together and jake wasnt.The assignment was each handed out to everyones group and each was different and they had to research something.Calleigh and eric had to research the school and its history whereas jake and kendra ha dthe towns history.Th teacher said it was due in 4 weeks and he expected only the best.It was time for sport and they were playing dodgeball.Eric was always good at dodgeball as was calleigh.Once they got inside the hall jake was with his friends coop and stetler and they were looking at eric and then laughing and eric knew it.Eric went and sat down and they waited for the teacherT: WHAT ARE YOU LOT WAITING FOR LINE UP COME ON They all lined up and jake and calleigh were on one team and eric and ryan were on another.The started throwing the ball and eric was surprisngly good he caught all the balls that were thrown his way and always got an opposing player.Then it weas down to eric ryan and kendra and clara and jake calleigh and rick and theresa.Ryan got rick and then theresa got clara and then ryan got theresa out and then rick and it was down to two each.Calleigh had one ball and she threw it at ryan and he caught it and then eric had the ball and he went to throw it at calleigh but for some reason he couldnt.He frozde and then as he was standing still jake hit eric and he was out.Then ryan had the ball and hit jake and then it was ryan vs calleigh.Calleigh threw the ball and it missed ryan and then he threw it and calleigh and missed but then she threw the ball again and got him out.Then calleigh was jumping around ad sayingC: we won we won we wonJake ran in and kissed calleigh making sure eric was watchingThen eric looked at jake and the he walked of into the locker room.Jake walked in after him and saidJ: hey do you have something on my girl or what?E: i - i dont know what your talking about jakeJ:calleigh thats whatE: oh right jake we are just doing an assignment together thats itJ: mmm hmm it better beE: let go of me jake or elseJ: or else what?Then eric hit jake really hard in the chest with both palms of his hands and jake fell over Jake got up and went to charge eric but ryan and coop jumped infornt of him and stopped himJ: im watching you he said to eric and pointing at him E: ok jake it was just a game get over itJ: OH I SEE WELL GAMES ON THEN DELKOR: eric what is this all about?E: i dont know gees im just playing dodgeball and trying to get through school.R: that better be all your doing he said and then eric got changed and went to his next class.

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CHAPTER 5Later that week ryan told eric that he would pick him up nice and early to go out on the boats.On saturday ryan pulled up at 8am and beeped and eric came out.Marisol was watching him leave and saidM: be careful ericE: i always am marisol then he waved and said byeRyan and Eric and they all headed out to the lake.They pulled up and they were unloading the boat and jet skis.Ryan looked over and saw kendra clara theresa and graciee and calleigh laying their towels out on the rocks.Ryan looked over and they waved and then eric loked awayR: what man?E: nothing ive just never been to anything like this beforeR: like what?E: guys and girls hanging out at alake bathing and swimming and stuffR: worried something might happne with the blondieE: what makes you say that ryan?R: oh nothing just genereal observation.Then Jake Coop and Stetler all pulled up with theri jet skis and they nodded at eric and ryan.J: hey coop dont go easy on new boy today will ya? C: you got it jakeJ: i hate how ryan brings theses newbies into our groupS: or is it that you hate how eric gets along with your girlJ: say what stetler?S: uh nothing ...jake...... yeah ....i.... i .....uh i hate him tooJ: thats more like it.After they all got their jet skis in the water they decided to go grab some drinks and the girls minded their stuff.Whilst they were gone the girls got on the jet skis and took them for aspin on the water.Calleigh was always the best at everything and graciee and theresa nearly got thrown back until the learnt not to pull the throttle so hard.They soon seen the guys trucks coming back so they put the skis back where they found them and headed back to the rocks.When they got there ryan and eric went right above the flat rocks to the highest point as the flat rocks where the girls were was way below them but close to the water and then they jumped and saidE&R: JERONOMOE!!!!And then jake stetler and coop followed and they all splashed the girls soaking them all.Eric and jake came up out of the water and they were watching calleihg who now stood up and she was wearing a black bikini with gold rings on the side and in the center of the bust.E: WOW J: HUH?E: i said wow that was a big jumpJake knew exactly what eric was talking about.Then all the girls asked ryan to take them out on the boat and kendra stayed very close to ryan on the wheel of the boat.Ryan had hooked up rubber tubes and then the girls grabbed onto the bars and ryan took them out on the water .Eric was on the jet ski behind him so he could catch anyone who may fall off.Ryan pulled full throttle and then they all took off.Theresa and graciee and clara held on for the whole time whereas calleigh fell off.Ryan was about 500m ahead of eric and eric seen calleigh and went to pick her up when jake pulled up and he saidJ: i got this one eric and pulled calleigh up on his jet skiE: ok jake!!!!!!!! then eric took off and then they all headed back for a bbq lunch on the side of the lake.Coming up to the lake was a regular thing for jake stetler and coop and ryan that they had their own tables and chairs and campfire and bbq built.Ryan and jake cooked and the eric just went for a walk around the other side of the lake into some bushland.Eric kept thinking about how good calleigh looked then he seen her in the water.

 
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