CSI: Miami

Hey guys this is my new story i will give you a sneak peek but then im finishing my other one before i go any further.Oh and im sorry if i screw any of this up im australian so its my view and im trying hard to translate all of this into american and ive gone all out on research for this too so enjoyLets beginChapter 1They walked hand in hand down the hall, they were so in sync that each stride was perfectly matching person next to them.He was the hottest football player in school and everyone wanted to be with him or be him.She was the prettiest girl in school her hair was long and blonde and she was thin and she was rich.She was friends with everyone and they all loved her for it.Jake and calleigh were the best couple at school and no one would ever get in there way.Jkae had kissed calleigh on the head and then he went off to class.Calliegh spun around and she went to her classes as well.Calleigh went and sat with her friends theresa clara graciee and kendra.T: hey callieghC: hey girls G: so hows jake?C: jake is good we went to the movies last night and oh my was i nervousK: so what did he do?C: hey i dont tell ok then she turned around.But i will say it was hottttt!!! then she laughedGraciee theresa clara and kendra all laughed and said I bet it was.After class calleigh was wlaking down the hall when she bumped into someone and she saidC: oh im sorry and she helped pick up his booksT-t-thanks i guessCalleigh smiled and then she got up and walked away.Her hair was sawying fomr side to sode and he could smell her scent in the hair then somone else bumped into him and he dropped his books again.Jake laughed and then he kept walking towrads calleigh.When he caught up with calleigh he swung her around and then he kissed her.The other guy had just gotten up and he loked at them and had a lok of dissapointment on his face.Later that day calleigh went to class and she seen the guy she bumped into in the hall and he was sitting next to her.Calleigh xmiled and then she loked again but he wasnt looking at her he was just reading.C: hey im calleigh i bumped into you in the hall i havent seen you anywhere before are you newYeah iam i arrived here yesterday the names eric C: well eric have you got a last name eric? she giggledHe held out his hand and saidE: Delko eric delkoC: well hi delko eric delko im duquesne calleigh duquesneShe smiled at him then he looked up and he seen her eyes and they caught him a little off guardE: wow how bright are your eyesThen jake walked in and satnext to calleigh and she turned awa.C: hey jake glad you finally got herethen eric put his head back down and continued to read.

hey that's a good start Bel i loved it i can't wait to read this soon...Theresa

OMG ,I LUVVVVVVVVV IT .I WAS THINKIN ABOUT DOING A SCHOOL 1 BUT CALLEIGH WAS GONNA B A TEACH AND ERIK'S NIECE WULD B 1 OF HER STUDENTS

POOR ERIK .HOPEFULLI LATR IN THE STORI ,THEY'LL HOOK UP

yea...Theresa

Super start. Ok got to run I am in trouble now. lol

hey Bel!!this is great!!!you need to keep goingwell gotta go!take carelove from Nancy & Emma

hey kristen you crack me up lol and my ever so supportive lil theresa and nancy and emma angel hey im only 2-3 chapters off finishing froma distance then there will be more on here ok? OK? OK? GOOD HAHAAHA NIGHT GIRLS LOVE BEL

YAY i can't wait YAY...Theresa

Very nice can't wait for the next part

that was a great start Bel! ~~Carly~~ ^__^

Hey I try lol. JK. Seriously. I have to pull teeth to get him to watch the show with me on Monday's when he doesn't work which is less than once a month. lol Last night we had to have a talk about dedication lol. i couldn't help but laugh. then he started so i knew he had no fight. lol

HAHAHAHA LMAO OH KRISTEN I THINK YOU AND I ARE IN THE SAME BOAT HAHA MY HUSBAND CANT WIN ON ME I DONT MAKE HIM WATCH THE SHOW WHEN ITS ON OR IM WATCHING IT ON DVD ITS DOORS CLOSED DONT TALK TO ME DONT ASK FOR ANYTHING I WONT DO JACK SHIT UNTIL ITS OVER HAHAHA SAME RULE FOR THE KIDS TOO WHEN ITS CSI TIME THAT MEANS NO TIME FOR HIM AND IM ONLINE WHEN HES AT WORK AND THEN WHEN HES HOME IM OFF BUT AS SOON AS HES OUT THE DOOR AND CLEARLY DOWN THE BLOCK IM STRAIGHT BACK ON AND OFF BEFORE HE GETS BACK ITS ALL THERESA AND CLARAS FAULT THEY GOT ME ADDICTED LOL I DO A 2AM WALK OF SHAME INTO BED HE KNOWS WHERE IVE BEEN BUT WHEN IM BUGGERED THE NEXT HES SYMPATHETIC I LOVE MY CSI AND PLUS IVE BEEN MORE HAPPIER SINCE IVE BEEN ON HERE THAN I HAVE IN ALONG TIME SO HES COL WITH IT COS I USED TO BE VERY CRANKY BUT YOU GIRLS MAKE ME HAPPY SO HAPPY ME HAPPY HUSBAND HAPPY ALL HAHAHA ILL BE POSTING MORE IN THE AFTERNOON YOUR TIME BYE GIRLS

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT BEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111*~LIZ ZIE~*P - S> WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey i wont post anymore until the after noon unless theresa asks firstly theresa? theresa? are you there? anyways the aftrenoon is when theyll be up i need time to write them i onyl have 4 chapters done so far but i need more time cos this is one os alot different bye girls