CSI: Miami

those chapters were great Bel i love this story so far anyway i am super tired i have been all day so i will talk to you tomorrow good night Bel ~~Carly~~ ^__^

good damn chapters lol i LOOOVVVEEEDD IT!!!! jake is such a jerk ugh lol...o well keep goin its good

CHAPTER 6Eric had seen calleigh but he kept walking and then she yelledC: HEY ERIC WHY DONT YOU COME IN?E: IM FINE THANKS CALLEIGH Then calleigh got out of the water and was walking towards eric.Eric kept looking away because calleigh had looked so hot in her swim suit.C: can yOU hand me my towel please?E; sure and then he handed her the towelC: hold this up for me please?Eic held the towel up so calleigh could get undressed and into some dry clothes and as she was eric seen the side of her ass.He couldnt help but look and then calleigh saidC: hey hey eyes up top pleaseE: sorry i must have got something in my eye he saidCalleigh laughed and then she turned around and she was facing eric face first.She took the towel and as she did she rubbed his hand.Eric kept looking at calleigh directly in the eyes.Then calleigh looked down and she looked back up and eric was still staring at herShe softly saidC: eric and he softly answered backE: calleigh and then he kised her on the lips.Calleigh pulled him against her and then the towel was the only thing stopping their bottom half from touching each other and then they pulled against each other and made their kiss more deeper and lasted longer.Than eric pulled away and saidE: im sorry calleigh im not usually like this im-im -im sorry i have to goC: eric dont please and she grabbed his hand and pulle dimh back this time the towel had dropped and their bodies were against each other.This was the first time eric had ever had anyoone so close to him in this way.Eric had pushed calleigh back into a tree and she had her back against it and eric had his hand above her head.E: calleigh what are you doing? your with jake remember doesnt that mean anything to you?C: yes but you make me crazy i dont know what it is that makes me feel like this but when im with you all alone i have to have you i cant help itE: i feel the same way calleigh and im not even usually like this with anyone but you have me in a daze somehow and i dont know how to get out.C: then let me show you how and then she kissed him again and he kissed her back hard again and this time they were both aginst the tree Eric had touched calleighs back and she only had on her bikini top and short shorts.As soon as eric touched her she arched her back and drew herslf closer into him and that made him kiss her more and then they heard someone yell out R: LUUUUUUUUUUNCH IS REAAAAAAAAAAAADY!!!!!!!!And then they stopped kissing and they laughed and eric saidE: that how i get out of your trance.They both headed back but eric came out the side he went and calleigh came out the otherside of the lake so they wouldnt look suspcious.After they ate lunch they all went back into the water and this time they were all on their jet skisIt was Jake and Calleigh Ryan and Kendra and Eric and Clara and Graciee and Coop and theresa and Stetler.Theresa never really like stetler that much as she thought he was too arogant for hi own good.They all headed out into the water and headed up stream and then ryan saidR: LAST ONE BACK HAS TO PUT ALL THE JET SKIS BACK ON THE TRAILERS.The girls squealed as they knew when the boys say that that means the fast and fun stuff happens.Ryan and Coop were the first to head back and the got back at the same time.Stetler arrived 3rd then it was jake and eric coming in last.Jake pulled the throttle hard and then he cut eric off and eric had to dodge him and therefore made him come in last.J: AH HA DELKO YOU CAME LAST WELL LOAD THEM UP he said with s grin on his face.Eric began to back everyones car down to the ramps and then he put all 5 jet skis and the boat back on the trailers.After wards they all went back to ryans to have a few drinks and just chill out.

please keep going Bel i need more please this is good i love it...Theresa

CHAPTER 7Later that night at ryans eric tried to stay away form calleigh.Ryans parents were out for the night and ryan and his sister threw a party with a few friendsEric was sitting out by the pool with his feet in the water and then he felt someone walk behind him.E: hey cal i mean claraC: you were especting calleigh arent you?E: sorry i got you mixed up he said with a lok of confusion on his faceC: its ok i saw you two today out at the lake..... but dont worry i wont tell promiseE: thanks clara i didnt mean to its just it happenedC: eric dont explain yourself to me i understand really i do plus i cant stand jake he is too on himself to be with calleighand to tell you the truth i dont even think shes happy with himE: really?C: yep every weekend i get the football match cryJake treats her like shit after football and then im always the one pciking up the peices.E: im sure she loves you for it?C: i hope so cos the girl is driving me mad i tell yaE: so you and her arent that good a friends?C: oh yeah we are but you know friends can only take so much then you know you need to vent me=clara you=vent me=free she laughedE: ok clara well im here for you if you ever want to vent againhe laughed.Then clara kissed him on the cheek and left.Eric was touching his face and then he smiled and got up and went inside.He was walking past to go to the bathroom but he heard ajke and calleigh yellingJ: what do your think you are doing with that dirt bag calleigh?C: jake let go of my arms your hurting meJ: sorry now look are we together or not calleigh?C: yes jake we are J:then stay away from him got itC: i cant we have classes togetherJ:Fine then no after school stuff understand?C: fine now let me goEric heard them coming for the door and he jumped into the nearest door which was a linen cupboard.jake walked off first and fhen calleigh was there and she was crying. Calleigh didnt want to go downstairs just yet so she jumped int the cupboard where no one would see her.C: how could i not see him jake you idiot god why do i do it?Then eric popped out from behind the linenC: OH CRAP ERIC YOU FRIGHTENED THE SHIT OUTTA ME!!!!E:SHHHH im sorry i heard you arguing and this was the first place i ran when i heard you coming.Calleigh giggled C: its kinda hot you know hiding out when were not supose to be togther.Calleigh tripped on a towel and she nearly went throught the wall but eric caught her.E: you ok calleighC: yeah thanks eric im such a clutz.E: its ok iam tooThen calleigh seen she had her hands on his arms and she rubbed his arms and then he looked at her and she kissed him againE: ok this is getting repetative he smiledThen she kissed him again and he tripped and they fell on the floor and eric was on top of her.

good chapter i want more pleaseeeeeeeeeee this is getting good...Theresa

CHAPTER 8His leg was in the center of hers and he leant down and kissed her some more.Then their crutches touch and eric placed himself harder on calleigh and started to rub her.Calleigh was enjoying every moment when she seen foot steps walk past the doorC: shhh and then caleigh pulled herself up and said C: we should ge out there before we look sus for both not being out there.Eric went down first but he snuck out the front and went home.As he climbed into his bedroom window the light turned onE: holy shit marisol what are you doing in here?M: where have you been ive been covering fro your ass for hours!!!!E: why?M: cos of dad thats why hes mad that you didnt join us for dinner and i told him that you were sick and well you get the restWhere have you been?E: at ryan wolfes?M: oh my god are you serious that guy has alot of moneyE: i knowM: wait a minute youve been making out with someone havent you?E: no whyM: eric your a bad liar you have lipstick all over your face and on your collarE: shit really so what if i have then he started to rub it off and looked in the mirror and said E: haha very funny marisolM: yeah it was and you just told me that you did hahahaE: so whatM: who is she twirling her night gown around and spinning in a circleE: its uh uhM: spit it out romeoE: its calleigh okM: as in calleigh duquesne? calleigh? jakes calleigh? the rich blonde girl? calleigh?E: yes marisol and you have to keep it quiet promiseM: fine then but you owe me big time got it?E: ok thank you marisolThe eric went to bed but he was lying awake thinking about calleigh.The next week at school the big football match was coming up and even though eric wasnt a big fan of jake he still went to watch the game at least just to see calleigh cheer.That friday night he went to the game and he sat right up front in the centre of the stands.Caleigh hadnt yet noticed that eric was there so he took a few pictures of her and then she saw him and he stoped taking pictures.He looked at her and she smile and waved.CL: hey calleigh looks like your new boyfriends is hereCA: he not my boyfriends claraCL: well you two certaintly are friendlyCA: so i can be friendly with guys too clara gees come on lets get these girsl into line.Ryan turned up to watch the match as well and he found eric and sat nextt to him.Kendra was smiling at ryan getting his attention when she didnt realise that someone behind her was smiling at him too.She was less obvious then kendra but good enough that ryan could see her .It was the nearing the end of the match when there was only a minute to go and then jake scored the winning touchdown which won the game.Everyone was cheering for jake which eric didnt like much but he joined in anyways.Their team had won which everyone was happy about and then jake yelled J: PARTY AT MY HOUSE COME ON!!!!R: hey eric you want to come?E: is it wise you know how jake dont like me and its at his houseR: oh come on there will be so many people there you wouldnt even know that you were there.E: ok then R:: so you want to ride with me then?E: yeah thanksAs they got into the car park they seen calleigh get into her car with clara kendra theresa and graciee and eric smiled and put his head down.G: calleigh i think that guy really likes youC: graciee ill tell you the same thing ti told clara we are just friendsG: oh yeah ok im sure you are and they all giggled.Jake and coop and stetler all got into their car and they led the way.Eric thought he would stay out of harms way at the party so he didnt go near calleigh but he was still watching her from afar.

that chapter was so good pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue Bel please i need more...Theresa

dam it!!!....im hooked....eric is sooo hot and adorable aw plzz continue lol

so you all like this story then?? im trying my best to convert to american as you all know im aussie and its way different an i know hes adorable isnt he haha

yes we so love it i know i do i'm one again hooked but i love being hooked....Theresa

CHAPTER 9At the part eric had stayed outside and he was just hanging out with some girls.After a while it was getting late so eric decided to walk back home as he like to look at the scenery around hm.He was about 4 blocks away from home when someon came up bahind him and grabbed his hand which he pulled awayE: oh hey calleigh what are you doing out here walking alone?C: well im not alone anymore im with you she smiledE: why arent you with jake and wheres your car?C: well jakes drunk and i lent it to clara cos she had no ride home and she lives ont he otherside of townE: well that was niceC: plus you told me i should enjoy the view once in a while so thats what im doing, i seen you watching me all night and then i saw you leave so i snuck out before jake could notice.E: you'll get in trouble if he sees us together you knowC: ah so whatEric laughed and calleigh grabbed his arms and wrapped hers around his and then they walked all the way home.Eric and calleigh slowly walke dhome and they spoke about everything and then when calleigh go to her house she could see the lights were still on.C: oh crap must mena my dads still awakeE: is that bad?C: well it is if hes been drinking but its nothing i cant handleE: you want me to come in/C:oh na its ok hell just pass out soon thanks for walking me home ericE:anytime okEric waved good bye and then he walked the rest of the way home.Eric got inside and marisol came in and was teasing him on his bedM: hey eric what was on tonight that kept you out so late?E: gees marisol do you have like a gps on me or what?M: hey i keep an eye out ok to protect youE: from what?M: dads anger you know he is when he doesnt know where youve been you know your his pride and joyEric punched her int he arms E: am notM: are too so who was tonights lucky girlE: calleigh againM: eric ive told you to be careful with that one E: i walked her home thats itM: what were you doing with her anywaysE: i wen tto watch the football match and then we went to jakes to partyM: oh my god you went to jakes house how was it? was it huge?E: like you wouldnt believe he laughedM: man i wish dad wasnt so tight with all our money i mean theres thousands upon thousands in the bank but oh no he prefers to live simplyE: theres nothing wrong with thatM: yeah maybe if you wanna be a nerd she said laughingE: hey im not a nerd im quietM: yeah ok well im going to bed ive got some men waiting for meE: WHO?M: on the movies eric on the movies E: yeah and im sure somewhere is horatio too kissy kissyMarisol threw a pillow at eric and then he pushed her out the door.

CHAPTER 10Later that night eric heard something outside so he got up and loked outside and seen calleigh in his treeEric whispredE: calleigh what are you doing hereC: phew thank go this is your house otherwise the neighbour would have thought i was a weird girl climbing the treeEric laughed E: then hurry up before my dad hears he'll kill me if he finds a girl in the house well at leats in my room im dead.Eric went back over and locked the door then he helped calleigh in through his window.E: what ae you doing here calleigh?C: my dad got verbal again and i cant sleep so i was hoping to crash at your house if its ok?E: umm yeah sure Then calleigh and eric sat on his bed and she talked all about her dad and eric listened and they talked for ages Then calleigh said she was tired and eric said ok il take the floor and you can have the bed.Calleigh got into his bed and then she put her hand under the pillow and she felt something.She pulled it out and it was their pictures from the mall.Eric had laminated them so they wouldnt get ruined.Calleigh slipped them back under the pillow and then she rolled over to where eric was sleeping .After about and hour or so she whispered C:Eric? eric? are you awake?E: iam now C: i cant sleepE: and ?C: will come up here and lay next to meE: i dont think thats wise calleighC: please just as friends eric nothing moreEric got up and he climbed into bed with calleigh and she pulled his arm aroundher stomach and then eric got the pillow form on the floor and stuck it betweent hem as he didnt want calleigh feeling something she shouldnt.Calleigh laughed as she knew what he was doing and then eric hugged her tighter and they fell asleep together.In the morning calleigh woke up and she got up first and then she asked eric if he was getting up as wellE: umm err yeah just give me minute he said holding the doona.C: oh ok she giggled and then she faced the door and got dressed.Eric tried to sneak out with calleigh but marisol caught themM: AH HA bustedE: marisol shhh!!! its not what you thinkM: ha like i care hey calleigh Then eric seen his dad coming up the stairs so marisol quickly grabbed calleigh from out of eric room and she pushed eric back inM: hey daddyEF: WHOS THIS?M: daddy this is my friend calleighEF: right then wheres eric is he up yetM: umm i dont know yet knock on his doorEF: ERIC YOU AWAKE YET?Eric popped his head out the door and then he said yeah dad im upEF: good go help your mother.Eric father walked off to his room and eric and calleigh both looked at marisol and saidE&C: thank you marisol C: im going to go ok ill see you laterE: ok bye and then marisol saidM: eric yuor coming with me today im getting rid of somethingE: what/M: oh you'll find out.And then eric and marisol headed out in her car to the mall.Once they were there marisol made eric shave his head and then she went to the eye doctor and she got eric some contacts.M: wow theres my spunkaE:marisol your making me blushM: i know now come on your coming shopping with meThen as they were heading for the clothes shops they seen jake and calleigh.M: hey calleighJ:marisol , delkoE: jake and eric and calleigh just smiled and then eric kept looking back and thrn eric wasnt watching where he was going and ran into a stnad.Everyone saw and they laughedM: oh eric god watch where your going eyes to the front now come on.Marisol had got eric help and opinion in picking up a dress for her date with horatio.E: so how serious are you and horatio marisol?M: umm pretty seriousE: does dad know yet?M: NO AND HES NOT GONNA E: ok well how are you going on a date if dad dont knowM: im meeting him elsewhere and he you knwo what she said biting her lipM: HE HAS HANDCUFFS she giggledE: OH OH MARISOL TOO MUCH INFO TOO MUCH JUST GET THE DRESS AND LETS GO!!They got home and eric dad was furious at marisol for cutting eric hair off and his mother was hapy she could see his beautiful eyes.EM: oh sweetie look at how much your eyes stand out now you look handsome and she kissed himE: thanks ma im going to go upstairs and study call me when dinners ready or you want some help.Eric went up to his room and he was looking in the mirror and rubbing his head.All he ket thinking was i hope calleigh likes this.

good chapter Bel more please this is good...Theresa

awww eric and calleigh spooned....!!!! lol sooo sweet...hope they get 2 spoon more lol...keep goin this is good