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i know the story is as follows they are all rich and go to the same school they are all around the 15-17 age group jake and stetler are football idiots but coop is nice for now and calleigh is rich and her dad is the best lawyer in town but he blinded by her sneakiness as she is hot for eric but erics not pushing her he'll let her come to him freely and then the only difference is horatio is the towns sheriff and he has major hots for marisol who has to keep it a secret cos her dad is seriously strict eric is knida nerdy but at times he comes out of his shell but he still is partially afraid to take on jake and his "boys" but that wont last forever anyways i better get back to more writing theresa where are you i need you and clara where are you too!!!!! msg me

CHAPTER 13Later that week at school the sports teacher had told them that they had cross country training coming up and that now was the time to start.They were split into alphabetical order and into 3 groups a-h i-p and q-z.Jake Calleigh and Eric were all in the first group and they were the first ones to break off.They were running through the woods when jake pushed eric and he ended up in a big puddle.Calleigh didnt see as she was way ahead of the guys.Clara was coming up and she saw eric an dpulled him upCL: COME ON ERIC DONT LET THAT PEICE OF SHIT PUSH YOU DOWN GET UP GET GOING NOW!!!!Eric smiled and then he kept running and he finally caught up with the class and the teacher saidT: DELKO WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?E: nothing i just fellT: right well everyone hit the showers and ill see you next class DELKO see me after classE: yes ma'amEric didnt know what she wanted and then she asked himT: did someone push you delko cos that water patch was a fair way from the trackE: no ma'am im just clumsyEric wasnt going to go dirty on jake as he knew if he did then he'd just get more slackT: fine then off to your next class then.Eric went to his next class and then at lunch again he was outside and Ryan came overR: dude the action is inside not outsideE: yeah thats kind of why im not in thereR: are you scared of jake eric?E: no why?R: cos you back off from confrontationE: and thats so bad?R: sometimes thats why the guy picks on you cos you never fight backE: no its because of calleigh that he picks on meR: well yeah that too he laughedThen eric seen jake coming out and he saw he was coming for him.Jake charged over at Eric and then he hit his books down and pushed eric over and kicked himE: WHAT DID I NOT DO THIS TIME?J: EVERYTHING I SAW WHAT YOU DID TO HERE: DID WHAT???? CALLEIGH WHAT IS HE TALKING ABOUT?????Calleigh just shook her head and didnt say anything.Jake then hit eric on the side of the face and then he grabbed him by the shirt and kept on hitting him.Eric did nothing back and everyone stood around and did nothing.Then Jake got up and walked away and everyone was loking at eric in sympathyE: WELL I DIDNT SEE YOU HELP DID I?Then everyone looked at calleigh and eric loked at her and saidE: YOU HAPPY NOW!!!!!!!!!!!????? Calleigh took off after jake and then clara came over and helped pick him upE: thanks claraCL: i hate that guy one year i just wish someone would kick his ass for all of us.Eric went home that day but he locked the door straight away as he didnt want marisol seeing him this way nor his dad.

CHAPTER 14Over the next few weeks eric had stayed away from calleigh and jake and he even ate his lunch far away from anyone.He sat where it was peaceful and quiet and it was where all the sports equipment was.Calleigh had been secretly watching him with and she found out where he was.Eric was walking home when calleigh came up behind him and saidC: hey stangerE: calleigh what do you want you got me into alot of shit with jake you know that?C: yeah im sorry eric can you please wait?E: what for jake to kick my ass againC: hey i wanted to talk to youE: ok calleigh talk thenC: i need help with somethingE: with what?C: my chemistry homeworkE: but you dont do chemistryC: uh yeah i do my dad had me start it a while back and i kinda actually like it and im behind and i need help to catch up so can you help meE: yeah i can but where will we study since my place is too noisyC: my house again 7 on friday night?Jakes out of town for football so dont worry about him cos i know thats what you were thinkingE: fine then but if i get my assed kicked again im coming for you got it?C: ok then ill see you fridayEric went home and then he couldnt wait till the next day.Friday had come and it went so fast and then eric headed over to calleighs.They stayed in the kitchen until her mom came home and then she brought a bunch of friends back too C: come on eric lets go upstairs they get pretty rowdy in hereCalleighs moms friends were whilstling at eric and he laughed and they went upstairs to her room and finishe doff the home workThey were sitting on the lounge when eric luaghedC: what?E: doesnt this scene feel familiar he laughedC: umm i dont know what your talking about ericThen eric began to say what happened and calleigh cut him off and saidC: i know eric i know she laughed.Then eric stayed on his side and then calleigh swung her feet around and put them over erics legs.E: hey control yourself young ladyC: iam im only resting my feet and you were the one who said screw it remember?Eric loked at her and then he starting to touch her feetC: oh yeah thats feels good eric my feet are killing me form the cross countryE: really?C: yup then eric massaged her feet for her.C: thanks eric that was really good and she put her head back and closed her eyes then she titled her head towards erics side.Calleigh opened her eys to find eric looking right at her and his hand was now on her leg and then calleigh reached over and kissed him.Eric kissed her back and then they moved back to her bed again and then she pulled the curtains and locked the door and then they got into bed again.Eric and calleigh were laying next to each other and eric saidE: cal you sure again and you havent anyoneC: yes im sure and nope i havent Eric rolled over ontot calleigh and she was looking at him directly in the eyes as was he to her.Eric took of his pants followed by calleigh and then eric came down on calleigh and her kissed her neck and then they had sex.Calleigh and eric laid next to each other and she smiled an dhe saidE: are you ok?C: mm hmm are you?E: yeah calleigh i want you to know that i never have done anything like that with anyoneC: me either eric not even with jakeE: i thought you would haveC: nu uh not even close he wont even touch me that wayThen eric rolled over and kissed her and saidE: well then he is stupid and he kissed her some more Later that night eric went home and then as he walked into his room marisol saidM: where have you been?E: studying at calleighsM: oh yeah i betE: thats it marisol well where have you been ?M: with horatio man that guy is so hot!!!E: does dad know yetM: NO!!!E: ah ha i found a weakness marisolM: shut up ericThen marisol jumped on the bed and flipped eric off.ED: WHAT WAS THAT??E: marisol!!!!Marisol was laughing at eric.

OMG!!!! i sooo hate jake ... lol... i LOVE UR STORY BEL!!!! its great plzz continue

Chapter 15 It was beginning to get cold and winter was now setting in.Eric still walked to school but he loved theview no matter which season it was.Jake picked calleigh up everyday and ever since calleigh and eric had sex they havent spoken much.Jake knew something was up with eric and calleigh but he didnt have any evidence.One day after school jake coop and stetler seen eric walking and they jumped out and grabbed him and they took him to the other side of town and they pulled his shirt jacket jumper and shirt off and pulled his pants down revealing his boxers then they taped him to a pole with his hands backwards.They then took off leaving eric freezing.There was no way he could pull anything back on and therewere no cars for hours.Then a man pulled up and he hurried over to eric and cut him loose.He ran back to the car and got a blanket but eric collapsed on the gorund.He drove him to the hospital where he was told eric had a serious case of pnuemonia and had to stay in until he was much better.The man drove to erics parents house and he knocked on the door.M: hey horatio what are you doing here? come for a bit of fun hey she said rubbing himH: no im sorry its ericM: what do you mean eric ? MA DAD THE POLICE ARE HERE ABOUT ERIC!!!EM: WHAT IS IT ABOUT ERIC?H: ma'am im afraid to tell you but eric was found out at the last restop stripped down .M: OH MY GOD H: he is hospital now but he has a serious case of pnuemonia and he has to stay in until hes better i just thoguth id tell you.M: thank you officer caine thank youEric and his family went straight to the hospital and they saw eric who was sleeping.He didnt wake up the whole time they were there so they left.Later that night calleigh turned up at the hospital since marisol had rang her and she had walked in and seen him there.C: Eric are you ok?Eric batted an eye for her and then she saidC: hey eric i came as soon as i heardE: calleigh?C: yeah its me im sorry eric i know this is my faultE: h-h-how is it?C: jake its always jake i know it.E: calleigh its ok i just need some restCalleigh walked over and looked at eric and then she kissed his forehead and he grabbed her handE: i-i- miss you callieghC: i miss you too ericThen calleigh kissed eric on the lips and then she went home again.The next day calleigh confronted Jake and coop and stetler and asked them if they were responsible for eric being in the hospital.Jake denied it but stetler and coop wouldnt look at calleigh and thats how she knew they were lying.Calleigh told jake he had 2 days to tell her the truth or she was breaking up with him.Jake went to calleigh the next day and he told her he did do that to him but hey were certain someone would have came and helped him way before he got pnuemonia.Calleigh was furious at jake and she told him she didnt want to see him for a while.Everyday jake would show up at calleighs house begging for her to forgive him but calleighs dad would just tell him to go away.

CHAPTER 16Eric was back home and it was christmas eve when he was in his room and he heard a tap at the window.C: eric eric??Eric opened the window and let he rinE: calleigh im going to get into so much troubleEric locked his door and then calleigh sat on his bedCalleigh started to cry and eric said E: hey whats the matter why you crying on christmas eve?C: my dad hes drunk again and hes talking alot of mean stuff so i ran offCan i stay here again please?E: sure but shouldnt you be?C: i know eric i just need some time out.Eric went down and told his parents that he was going to bed as he was tired plus he joked that santa was coming.Eric went back upstairs and he shut the door and locked it and then he got into bed where calleigh was and they faced each other.C: eric im sorry i didnt talk to you fater we .........you knowE: i know me too calleighC: i got scared but it was the best time i ever had she saidE: me too calleighThen calleigh kissed him and he kissed her back and then they hugged and eric pulled calleigh in closer he was running his fingers through her hair and then she kissed him again.This time she put her leg over his and eric ran his hand down her leg.Calleigh got out of bed and she stripped off to her undies and bra and eric stripped off to his boxers.Calleigh jumped back into bed and then she tickled erics body.E: calleigh your killing me you know that and he laughedC: i know then she got on top of him and she kissed his bodyAnd eric was enjoying her every touch and he touched her on the chest and she pulled herself up and looked at him.Eric was now kissing her chest allover and she was enjoying his touch.Eric rolled over and he faced her then they had sex again.When hey were finished eric got up and said E: hey dont take this the wrong way but i got you something okC: eric you didnt have to get me anything i wish i could have known because i would have of gotten you something tooE: hey you did just give me something .....C: what?E:happinessThen eric got out this green box with a silver bow on it and she opened it.C: oh eric i love it where did you get all this?E: these are photos i take when im out and about and i took some at the game that night and at the lake.C: i love it eric i really do and then she kissed him and hugged him.E: calleighC: yes she smiledE:i love youCalleigh looked up and he saidE: i dont expect you to say it but i do i love you calleighC: i love you to eric i do E: what about jakeC: i dont love jake i love you though and then he pulled her back down into bed and he hugged her then they fell asleep.Calleigh woke up the next morning and she left but she kissed eric on the head before she did.

awww YAY good chapter moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee this is good...Theresa

CHAPTER 17The next morning eric joined his family downstairs for christmas and then marisol pulled eric aside and whispered angrily M: WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU DOING WITH CALLEIGH IN YOUR ROOM LAST NIGHT?E: NONE OF YOUR BUSINESSM: YOU HAD SEX DIDNT YOU?E:GOD MARISOL EVER HEARD OF PRIVACY?M: ERIC THESE WALLS ARE THIN I HEARD IT ALLE: SO WHAT SHE CAME TO ME!!!!!!M: ERIC !!!!E: WHAT SHE NEEDED TO TALK AND I WAS THERE FOR HERM: YEAH IN MORE WAYS THAN ONEE: SHHHH MARISOLM: FINE THEN YOU BETTER KEEP THIS UNDER WRAPS THENE: YOU BETTER OR IM TELLING DAD ABOUT HORATIOM: YOU WOULDNT E: YEAH HUH I WOULDM: THAT WASNT YOUR FIRST TIME WITH CALLEIGH WAS IT?E: NO M: ERIC??? E: JUST ONCE BEFOREM: ERIC!!!!!!!!E:MARISOL!!!!!!!! M: WELL I HOPE YOU AT LEAST USED PROTECTIONE: MARISOL TOO MUCH INFO AND F.Y.I YES I DIDLater that day eric had a call from calleighE: hey calleigh merry christmasC: merry christmas to you toohey do you think we can meet later?E: umm sure where do you want to meet?C: umm is out at the lake ok?E:sureC: ok then ill see you then bye ericE:bye calleigh merry christmasLatre that night eric snuck out with marisol she was seeing horatio and eric was seeing calleigh.When he got out there calleigh ran and jumped on him and saidC: god i missed you today eric its so bad daddy was drinking hard todayE: so what you wanna stay again?C: haha eric but if its ok yeahE: sure you know the usual ill leav the window open this time C: thanks eric i appreciate it.So a few hours later without a change calleigh climbed in through erics window and she striiped down with him watching her and then she climbed into his bed and they hugged and fell asleep this time facing each other.

CHAPTER 18It was beginning to come around to new years eve and ryan had decided to have a big party at his house and everyone was invited.Calleigh was going with jake but eric decided to go with clara but clara knew something big was up with eric and calleigh but she didnt care cos she secretly had the hots for him too.Graciee went with coop who she was now getting rather cosy with him as he was so sweet.Ryan had asked kendra to join him but he was also watching someone else as he had been for a while.At the party everyone was starting to arrive and they were all drinking and dancing and having a good time.Eric was sitting out by the pool and clara was dancing near him.Graciee and coop were in the pool with ryan and kendra then they got out and went to get something to drink.The party was now in full swing and then eric went inside to get a drink and he saw calleigh and jake.Eric looked at caleigh then jake smiled and he took calleigh by the face and kissed her but he was looking at eric when he did.Calleigh pulled away and took off outside to a side path.Eric could see where she was through the window so he went out the back whilst jake laughed and started to drink.Ryan was dancing with kendra and he said R:im going to go get us some more dirnks ok and kendra saidK: ok ill be hereRyan went out into the kitchen and was standing infront of of the large pantry door when someone pulled him insideR: hey hey whats all this?R:oh hey there you why am i in here??: COS I WANT YOU RYAN WOLFEAnd then the girl kissed ryan and he kissed her back pushing her against the cupboard and they were kising each other back as hard as they could.Ryan couldnt believe that she was kissing him as he didnt think she liked him.He thought she was smiling to be polite but now he knew she liked him more.She told ryan to go back out before kendra got suspicious so he did but before he left she said?: meet me at midnight the cupboard upstairs ok the big one ok?R: you got itThen ryan left with a big smile on his faceR: kendra one for you and me K: where have you been?R: i went to get a drink and then i went to the bathroomK: right come on then.Graciee and coop were getting very comfy on the lounge and coop was tickling her stomach and they were mucking about.Stetler came in and he sat down and saidS: ooo i like that girl right thereC: whoS: that one right there with the dark reddish hairG: oh thats yelinaS: wait you know her?G: yeah shes in my spanish class but can tell you shes way out of your leagueS: what?G: shes way out of your leagueS: in case you hadnt noticed graciee this school is full of filthy rich kids with big money big houses andG: big egos?S: ha ha very funnyG: well all except oneC: and whos that?G: ERIC DELKOS: hes not richG: yeah huh he is major rich too his dad owns a major steelworks company several of them tooC: then why does he live in that small crappy house?G: because his dad doesnt like to flash off what they have he lives simplyC: what a loserG: hey i think its great and plus eric didnt end up a dick like you and jakeS: yeah well jakes got the girl hasnt he? he laughedC: as did i baby as did i Then graciee kissed coop and stetler saidS: ewwww come on get a room oh god im leavingAnd graciee laughed and saidG: well that got rid of him then coop kissed her again.

good chapter moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeee this is getting real good.....Theresa

CHAPTER 19Mean while outside eric could see calleigh and she was upset and he said come on lets go before anyone sees us and they held each others hands and they left for the bushland.C: eric eric wait its not easy to run in heels you knowE: sorry And then eric offered calleigh a piggy back ride and she jumped on him and he ran down a bit further.They stopped down where there were some broken down pool chairs and calleigh sat down whilst eric kneeled infront of her.E: hey hey come on its okC: i hate when he does that he kisses me just to piss you offE: hey im not pissed off i know when you two fight it makes you come directly into my arms and thats what i love the bestCalleigh laughed and said C: i wish i could be like you eric you dont care what anyone thinks and your so simple but me everyone expects something from me they all want the best from me and anything else is not acceptable.E: hey i dont i dont expect anything i just want you for who you all are.Then calleigh looked at eric and she kissed him.Eric pushed her back onto the pool chair and then he was climbing on top of her.He was kissing her neck and feeling up her skirtShe was kissing him back too and rubbing under his shirt and then eric felt up her top and then she undid his pants.Then they heard someone coming and then they stopped and jumped up and they could only see a shadow but they turned around and walked backE: come on lets head back k? meet me at midnight in the cupboard upstairs you remember which one right?C: how could i not she laughed.They went back to the party and calleigh went back to jake and then eric went back to clara.They were all dancing together coop and graciee and jake and calleigh eric and clara and ryan and kendra and steler had even managed to get yelina to dance too.They were all dancing and rinkng and some of them were getting quite tipsy and it was beginning to get around midnght.It was 5 miutes to new years and eric was waiting in the cupboard hiding and then ryan came in and he hid too eric didnt say anything as he wanted to scare him.Then son after ryan came in so did the mystery girl. Ryan jumped out and then calleigh opened the door and ryan jumpedC: THERESA WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN HERE???R: calleigh what are you doing here get out!!!!!!C: nu uh im here too and i said it first R: did notC: well im here first now there just said itR: theres no one in here for you calleighThen eric came out and taped ryans shoulderR: HOLY SHIT DELKO YOU SCACRED ME HANG ON .....OH MY GOD YOU TWOE: SSHHHHH RYAN OR WERE GOING TO GET CAUGHTR: I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHINGEric put his hand over ryans mouth then he reached through and grabbed calleigh and pulled her towards the back of the cupboard.They could hear everyone say 5....4...3....2.....1 HAPPY NEW YEARThne ryan and theresa kissed and then calleigh kissed eric and they were in such an embrace that ryan and theresa stoppe dkissing and they looked at calleigh and eric kissing and they saidR&T: WOW THAT IS....... WOW Eric and calleigh kept kissing and then ryan and theres did too.Ryan and theresa stopped again but eric and calleigh were now starting to rub each other since they were always so hot for each otherand then ryan saidR: OH MY GODS ERIC TAKE HER TO BED WHY DONT YOU!!!Then theresa saidT: OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD RYAN DONT YOU SEE IT ??R: WHAT?T: THEY HAVE GONE TO BED BEFORER: WHO HASNT GONE TO BEDT: NO THEY HAVE GONE TO BED BEFORE AND YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT IM SAYINGRyan looked at theresa and saidR:holy shit delko do you know what youve just done to yourself? if jake finds out your deadEric then looked at him and saidE: he wont if you keep your mouth shut please ryan dont blow it for usR: oh my god he saidC:ill tell kendra your here with theresa thenT: hey thats notC: well you better Than someone opned the door and it was jake he saw eric and calleigh hugging each other and then ryan and theresa next to each otherC: JAKE ITS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKEJ: OH REALLYThen jake pulled eric out and he had him pinned over the railing and saidJ: YOU TOOK THE WRONG GIRL DELKOE: JAKE ITS NOT LIKE THATThen everyone was looking up and they saw jake and eric fightingSomeone yelled FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT!!!

this is 2 good bel...continue plzz =)

CHAPTER 20Jake pushed eric against the wall and then eric shoved back and then jake punched eric and he went down.Jake started to kick him and punch him and then eric grabbed his arm and hit him.Jake got up and he punched eric again and then eric fell down the stairs and calleigh ran down to help him up and then jake pulled calleigh by her top and then pushed her across the room and she hit a wall.Clara then grabbed her and was hugging her.Jake continued to hit eric and eric just had his hand over his head trying to protect himself.Eric had managed to see jake legs an dhe pulled it and jake fell down then he hit him several times.Jake kicked eric against the wall and eric was weak from being hit so many times an dthne jake got up and hti eric some more until he fell to the floor and he started tto get tears in his eyes.Everyone was looking and then jake backed up and he saidJ: NOW YOUVE BEEN OFFICAILLY WARNED STAY AWAY FROM CALLEIGHEric got up and he looked at everyone and they were all giving him the sympathy look again and going oooo and awwwwww and then he saidE: ARE YOU SERIOUS??? AGAIN??? WHAT ARE YOU AFRAID OF??? YOU LIKE TO SEE ME BASHED I DONT SEE ANY OF YOU HELPING ME DO YOU? DO YOU?Then eric picked himself up and he left walking all the way back home.An hour later eric was back home and he ran straight upstairs and into his roomMarisol came in and she sat down with a face washer.M: eric honye look at me pleaseE: not now marisol i just wanna go to bedM: eric look at me now pleaseEric tunred and looked at marisol and she took in a deep breath and saidM: oh honey im sorry who did this?E:jake M: did he find out about you and calleighE: well he caught us in a cupboard but we werent doing anything except hugginM: i tod you to be carfeul with that guy hes dangerousE: i know marisol but i love her i really doM: hey you love her? how would you know?E: because i do and she loves me tooShe makes me happy everytime i see her and she sends a tingle through my body and when she kisses me nothing around us matters except for us two in that moment right there and then M: oh my god eric your going to make me cry stop itE: well thats the truth marisol are you telling me that you dont feel the same way about horatio?M: yeah i do but the way you said that then i mean ..... guys dont talk like that you knowE: well its how i feelThen marisol went over to the window and saw calleigh thereM: shit calleigh what are you doing here? how do you know how to get in here oh ok not the first time is it?C: no sorry marisolThen marisol was looking at calleigh and calleigh saidC: what M: nothing he really loves you she whisperedThen calleigh looked at eric and looked back at marisol and then marisol saidM: ill leave you to alone okC:thanks marisolE: thanks sisThen as she left he shut the door and locked it.Calleigh looked at eric and she touched his face with th ewasher and she gently rubbed allt he blood of his face.C: there you go eric ......im sorry about tonight im sorry i got you beat up again iam so so so sorryE:its ok it was worth it for you at least i wouldnt have taken a beating if i wasnt for you C: eric you look like your in pain here lay down and eric laid down and then she helped him take his clothes off until he wa sdown to his boxers.Then she stood next to him and he watched her undress infront of him again and then she climbed intobed with him again.Eric was looking up at the ceiling and he was too embarrassed to loko down since he let his girl's boyfriend beat the crap out of him.Calleigh aske deric to loko at her and he didnt.Then she pulled his face towards her and their bodies were facing each other and then eric looked at calleigh and he began to cry.Calleigh hugged him and told him it was ok now cos she broke up with jake and eric was still crying he had never cried infront of anyone not even his ever so close sister.Calleigh held eric and they fell asleep in each others arms that night.

good chapter moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i need more....Theresa

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wwwwwwwwww omg this is sooo cute SCREW JAKE!!!...poor eric ....love it this is good ...continue wen u can plzz