CSI: Miami

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ok cool thank you Bel, your welcome i'm glad to love it...Theresa

CHAPTER 21The next week at school calleigh walked in with eric but they werent holdin hands or anything just walking.Jake seen this and was very angry and now every one knew that they were no longer a couple.It was time for sport and this time the teacher put them through an obstacle course and it was girls first then boys.The obstacle course consisted of crawling on the ground running climbing ropes walk across a log and then jump down a big drop and then sprint to the finish line.Eric ryan jake stetler and coop were all lined up first and then the teacher let off the gun and the started.Stetler always came last as he was weak and thin, ryan and cooop were equal second as their strengths matched each otherbut this time eric was certain not to let jake win.Eric had alot of catching up to do as jake was miles out infornt.Jake was super fit for football and he was acing the whole course.Eric started to gain time and jake could hear the whole class cheeringE-RIC E-RIC E-RIC E-RICThen eric seen coop come up beside him and try to grab him btu eric jumped and he missed him.Eric put all his strength into catching up woth jake that he caught him on the big drop and then eric sprinted and then he beat jake to the finish line.Eric stopped to catch his breath and then jake came charging through and pushed him from behind.Eric went flying into a rock and he hit his head and then spun around and passed out.C: ERIC!!! Calleigh came sprinting over and she could see the big gash that jake had put in his head and then she called the teacher for help.Ryan and the teacher carried erics body back to the sick bay and then they called aparamedic to take him to the hosital.Everyone was going off at jake then jake seen calleigh coming over and he knew that she was mad .Calleigh came up and kneed jake right between the legs an dhe fell down and she saidC: THERE WAS NO NEED FOR THAT JAKE!!!!J: SO WHAT HE DESERVED ITThen calleigh kicked him again and he didnt say anything back.Jake was sent to the prinicple and he was suspended for a week for hurting eric.Later that day calleigh went to see jake at home.This time she actually knocked on the door.

CHAPTER 22C: Hello mrs delko my name is calleigh duquesne im a friend of erics and i was wondering if he was home yetMD: yes calleigh was it?C: yes ma'amMD: come on in hes just up in his roomC: and which one is that?Calleigh knew which one but she played dumb anywaysFirst door at the top of the stairs top your rightAs she ws going up the stairs she saw marisolC: hey marisol is he ok?M: yeah he is calleighEric's other sister saidES2: who is that?M: thats calleigh duquesneES2: REALLY WHAT SHE DOING HERE?M: shes here to see ericES2: why?M: well theyre friendsES2: wow but shes rich M: so are we ES2: yeah but shes major richM: shhh she canhear you you knowCalleigh knocked on erics door and he saidE: not now ma laterC: well i guess thats good im not your ma thenE: calleigh what are you doing here? and you came through the front door?C: yeah i know it was kinda weirdE: so what are you umm ???C: hey i wnated to check to see if you were ok oww that looks like it hurtsE: yeah it does 8 stitches across waysC: calleigh leant down and she kissed his foreheadAnd then erics other sister seen her kiss his head and eric got up and shut the door.Eric and calleigh were sitting on his bed when calleigh smiled at himE: what ????C: nothing i just like your houseE: calleigh my loungeroom is smaller than your bedroomC: i know but its nice you know is warm and invitingEric looked at calleigh and then he leant in and kissed her and she kissed him back and then they leant back on the bed and kissed some more and then eric smom opned the doorEM: would you kids like some oh my go eric lock the door for crying out loudE: MA!!!!!!!!! GET OUT!!!!!!!!Erics mother left and then eric locked the door and then they both sat up laughing and saidC: well i guess she knows im more than just a friend nowAnd then eric kissed her again.

good chapter i loved it more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue...Theresa

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CHAPTER 23Later that afternoon calleigh went home and as she walked out she smiled and saidC: thank you mrs delko it was nice meeting y'all.ES2: I tihnk eric like her ma i seen her kissing himM: that was on the head nancy and so what wow a kiss on the headN: so what M: exactly so shut up cos i can hear him comingN: how i know now shhhhEric walked out and then they all went quietE:talking about me again nancy?N: no eric i wasntE: sure you always are a bad liarN: shut up eric i seen her kiss your head E: so what? MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESSn: ooo touchy touchyEM: nancy stop itN: what he started it EM: i dont care now go take out the rubbish pleaseN: fine then ill do the filthy job i know what your up to too ERICE: good for you nancy now take yuorself out to where you belongNancy punched eric as they didnt always get along it was he and marisol and his mother who got along and his dad and nancy who got along.EM: eric i know you like that girl butE: ma dont say butEM: and dont do those eyes eitherE: what eyesEm: you know what i mean and anyways back to the topic i know if nancy knows shell tell your father so ill say this once keep it low and away from her and ill keep it away from your father and marisol i know your with horatio so dont even go there with meM: ERICE: MARISOL I DIDNTEM: I KNOW ALREADY AND THREN YOU JUST TOLD NOW SHHHH NANCYS COMING BACKlike i said keep it low and i will too and ericE: yes maEM: lock your door from now on please!!He laughed thanks ma EM: now go quick.N: what was that all aboutM: nothing nancy now go awayN: your mean marisol no wonder you dont have a boyfriendM: i dont need one i have the men on my wall she laughedThen nancy pushed her away.Then nancy went up to her room and she passed erics room where he was at his table studying his chemistry homework.N: what are you doing eric?E: go away nancy i know what your up too you only talk when you want somethingN: i know you and calleigh have a thing do you know shes with jake ?E: what ae you a jake supporter too are ya?N: the guy is cute but thats non fo your businessE: what do you want again nancy?N: i know yuor up to something and im going to tell dad when i find out she said around to the side of his headE: good then nancy i dont give a shit now get out As she walked out she hit his homework off the desk and all his work went everywhere again he saidE: bitch would you get out you wait till later ill get youN: oo im scare dand then eric pushed her out and he locked the door.He then picked up his homework and had to sort it out all again.

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haha Bel pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue i need more please that chapter was good...Theresa

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CHAPTER 24At school the next week jake had returned and everyone kep their distance from him.Calleigh ignored him as did eric and then in history the teacher set a new assignement and he had paired eric and jake together and they had to do an essay on th ehistory surronding the events.The topic was touchy for eric as it was about cubans and jake knew it.Jake hated the pairing and then he suggeste dthat they do the work together at his house.Eric agreed but told jae he better not try anything.Eric arrived at jakes later and he saw his house was bigger than calleighs but it was louder though.Jake takes eric out to the kitchen and then they sat down and jake began to search on his laptop and eric said i know alot of history jake aso i dont need to research itJ: yeha well there may be something you missed eric E: what ever jakeJ: hey i dont like this anymore than you do ok so lets just do this than get out okE: suits me fineAfter about and hour they had finihsed and eric said he would go home and type it up then jake saidJ: good then go home and get outta my face cuban trashE:: what did you sayJ: you heard me i said cuban trashE: your pathetic jake Then jake came and stood infront of eric and said J: GET OUT OF MY HOUSE YOU FILTHY CUBAN PEICE OF SHIT!!!!E:SCREW YOU JAKE NOW GET OUT OF MY WAY REDNECK!!J: YOU WANN BRING IT ON CUBA BOY?E: ONLY IF YOU CAN HANDLE ITJ: OH WELL SEE YOU WANNA FIGHT Then jake hit eric and he saidE: WHAT WAS THAT FOR?J: NO ON ECALLS ME A REDNECK IN MY OWN HOUSE E: WELL ITS WHAT YOU ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!J: BRING IT THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!E: OK THEN BOY IM GONNA KICK YOUR ASS!!!!J: BRING IT THEN CUBAN BOY YOUR GOING DOWN CUBAN TRASHE: SO ARE YOU REDNECKJ: GO SWIM BACK TO WHERE YOU CAM FROME: I WAS BORN HERE IN AMERICA YOU IDIOT SO WHAT SWIM BACK TO MY HOUSE DER HE LAUGHEDThen jake hit eric and he hit his head on the bench and then jake starts to kick himJ: IS THAT HOW A CUBAN FIGHTS ON THE FLOOR?Then eric stood up and he hit jake 4 times in the face and chest.Jakes dad seen all the fighting and then he yelledMB: HEY HEY WHATS GOING ON!!!?J: HE SAID WERE REDNECKS!!! he yelled over his shoulderE: YEAH BUT WHAT DID YOU SAY FIRST CUBAN TRASHMB: GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!!!E: FUCK YOU JAKE ILL GET YOU!!! Then eric went to throw a puch at jake but his dad stopped him and he grabbed his arm and hit it and eric felt it break staright away.Then Jakes dad kicked him and punched him in the face and saidMB: NOW GET THE HELL OUTTA MY HOUSE YOU FILTHY ROTTEN DIRTY PEICE OF CUBAN SCUMThen he threw eric out and his bok too down thre front stairs and then eric had to try and pick his bok up with his broken arm.Eric walked several blocks and then he rang calleigh.E: calleigh can you come and get me please im hurtC: oh my god where are you E: im at the golf courseC: eric thats the other side of townE: i know please hurry calleighCalleigh got in her car and she drove as fats as she could then she seen eric on the side of the road.

good chapter Bel i want more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this is getting good....Theresa

holy shit balls bel plzz write more

CHAPTER 25Calleigh stopped an dpicked up eric and then she seen his bone sticking out of his arm.C: ERIC WE GOTTA GET YOU TO A HOSPITAL AND FASTE: i know calleigh i knowThey got in and calleigh toko eric to the hospital and he had to have surgery.Erixc told his parwents that he fell off the gutter and ontot his arm he didnt want to say that jake and his dad bea himCalleigh called his parents and said that eric was at the hospital.Calleigh left and then eric went home later the next day.Calleigh went over to see eric and nancy answered the doorN: hey calleigh here to see eric sarcastically C: yes thank you im sorry i never got your nameN: NANCYC: nancy thenCalleigh walked inside and saw eric mother and sister marisolC: hey mrs delko marisol mr delkoMD: WHOS THIS?Mrs:thats eric's friend calleigh hunnyC: hello mr delko she said againThen marisol said M:here let me take you up to eric calleighThen calleigh went upstairs and nancy and erics dad watched her carefully till she was out of their sight.Marisol knocked on the door and said M: eric theres someone here to see youE: marisol im not falling for that again you already got me twice today the blow up doll you have is not my friendM: im serious!!!E: yeah and im going to go flog myselfThen calleigh saidC:well i hope not cos what am i for if you do that?Then eric jumped up and answered the door E: sorry calleigh marisol's being playing tricks on me all dayThen eric smiled at marisol and pulled calleigh into his room and locked the door.He pushed her against the door and kissed her.E: thank you calleighC: for?E: for taking me to the hospital and for typing up our assigmentC: is that where you were at jakes?E: yeah then he ummC: he what eric?E: he called me cuban peice of shit and then he said to swim back where i came from but i was born here in america so go figureC: god hes such a pig eric im sorryE: for what? dont be sorry for himThen eric sat down on his bed and calleigh said C: may i?E: sure Then she drew all over his cast and eric said E: thanks calleigh its looks way girly now he laughed.Then calleigh pushed eric down on the bed and she started to kiss him.E: calleigh my dads homewe cantC: i know but isnt it fun to try anywaysCalleigh was kisisng him all over and then she kissed his neck and then eric felt under her top when there was a knock at the doorEric got up and answeredE: oh its only you nancy what do you want N: dad wants to know if calleigh wants to saty for dinner?Eric loked at calleigh and she nodded okE: yes she will Than nancy looked at calleigh and then she walked awayC: i think your sister hates meE: she hates anyone when she doesnt know their business he laughed.Then eric and calleigh made out until dinner was called by marisol.Calleigh enjoyed dinner with eric family then she headed home.